Introduction:
Women rights can be very different to mens, sometimes to extreme points of inequality. In certain countries women’s education is only upto 13 years in school because they are believed to stay home babysitting and cleaning the house. Also women are so underpaid compared to men in sport and have the least audience watching them play compared to men's sport too.
Paragraph 1 - what causes your topic?
Over the years women have barely had education because in some countries it’s believed they are to stay home everyday babysitting and cleaning the house, well the men go out working and making money for the household. It was thought by many people that that’s how women should live their lives and how men should live theirs. Also people constantly appreciate supporting men's sport leaving the women sport out of the picture, and women shouldn’t have to deal with getting underpaid when the men get paid big time.
Over the years women have barely had education because in some countries it’s believed they are to stay home everyday babysitting and cleaning the house, well the men go out working and making money for the household. It was thought by many people that that’s how women should live their lives and how men should live theirs. Also people constantly appreciate supporting men's sport leaving the women sport out of the picture, and women shouldn’t have to deal with getting underpaid when the men get paid big time.
Paragraph 2 - what are the impacts of your topic?
The impacts on women’s lives can lead them to maybe getting sexually assaulted, like men can get assaulted too but the majority of the time women can be left completely frightened because they are generally weaker than men are. So this means women have a least chance of fighting them off than men. Also if women don’t do the babysitting or clean the house they generally get beaten up or assaulted for not listening to the elder.
The impacts on women’s lives can lead them to maybe getting sexually assaulted, like men can get assaulted too but the majority of the time women can be left completely frightened because they are generally weaker than men are. So this means women have a least chance of fighting them off than men. Also if women don’t do the babysitting or clean the house they generally get beaten up or assaulted for not listening to the elder.
Paragraph 3 - what is the situation of your topic?
To this day now men still believe that women should babysit and clean the house, well the mean are out doing something. For many years Kate Sheppard was going for the freedom of women rights because everyone deserves equality. She did a very good job as women rights has improved, like they can finally vote in New Zealand, can stay in school until year 13 for a best education, not having to stay home babysitting and clean the house and least assaults have happened, so Kate Sheppard has done the best of women mostly in New Zealand.
To this day now men still believe that women should babysit and clean the house, well the mean are out doing something. For many years Kate Sheppard was going for the freedom of women rights because everyone deserves equality. She did a very good job as women rights has improved, like they can finally vote in New Zealand, can stay in school until year 13 for a best education, not having to stay home babysitting and clean the house and least assaults have happened, so Kate Sheppard has done the best of women mostly in New Zealand.
Conclusion:
To finish this up women should have equal rights to men in everything possible, because women should be able to do what they like as they are their own person. Women rights are so important and have come a long way over the years because of this very important woman in New Zealand, Kate Sheppard.
To finish this up women should have equal rights to men in everything possible, because women should be able to do what they like as they are their own person. Women rights are so important and have come a long way over the years because of this very important woman in New Zealand, Kate Sheppard.
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