Wednesday, May 24, 2017

Titanium slow writing

WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing

If I didn’t arrive on the school grounds, if I had stayed at home, if I was better behaved then this wouldn’t have happened. I was scared, terrified and worried because there were aliens trashing the school.  I wish I was a normal, ordinary boy coming from an amazing family, but something happened. There was ripped wallpaper and tables tipped over on the floor, with  dirty paper drifting in the air. Slowly and cautiously filled with fear I tiptoe outside. I stole a red bike from the school.  Grinding my teeth; biting my nails; I scrunched my cold hands up and then…

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