Thursday, August 24, 2017

The mudslide


World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mudslide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

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As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…
The mudslide  
I went for an afternoon walk down the smooth, black concrete.I saw lots of old buildings that had cracked windows.When it all came rushing down to me,I screamed.It was brown like a rusty stick.The whole city was covered in brown ploppy mud.I was searching around for my family after what just happened.It took hours and weeks to find them but  no luck.I’m so sad I’ve just lost some family of mine.People were screaming for help to find their family’s and friends.Nobody could find anyone because they’re underneath brown ploppy mud.

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