Kia Ora Shontelle, Your slide reminds me of when we went to Australia and the slide with the dresses that you can wear in Bali are like the ones my dad got me when he came back from Bali. What place would you rather go to out of Australia or Bali?
kia Ora Shontelle, I like how you have used capital letters and alot of information. Next time you could put the words bigger because I can't really see it. Did you have fun making it? By madisyn
Kia Ora Shontelle my name is Jazmine from Greymain school in Mamaku 2. WOW I love the way you are having a lot of detail in your Passion project the way you made the slide it is really cool and it looks like you have put a lot of effected in your Project on Bali and Australia. By Jazmine
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Kia Ora Shontelle, Your slide reminds me of when we went to Australia and the slide with the dresses that you can wear in Bali are like the ones my dad got me when he came back from Bali. What place would you rather go to out of Australia or Bali?
ReplyDeletekia Ora Shontelle, I like how you have used capital letters and alot of information. Next time you could put the words bigger because I can't really see it. Did you have fun making it?
ReplyDeleteBy madisyn
Kia Ora Shontelle my name is Jazmine from Greymain school in Mamaku 2.
ReplyDeleteWOW I love the way you are having a lot of detail in your Passion project the way you made the slide it is really cool and it looks like you have put a lot of effected in your Project on Bali and Australia.
By Jazmine